I am a Year 8 student at Glen Innes School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 8 and my teacher is Mrs Ramkolowan.
I love your Story. I wonder How it was on that day and what it looked like.By Franique
I like how you used adjectives in your poem.I wonder what made you think of this kind of story? Is this your favorite poem?
That poem is amazing because it has exciting describing words.I wonder if you could add some more poetry writing.Emile rm11
Nice Descriptive Words. I like how you painted a picture in our headsBy Brenner
I liked how you used lot's of interesting words in your poem.I wonder how long it took you to do this poem?Keep up the good work.By Ryka room11
5 comments:
I love your Story. I wonder How it was on that day and what it looked like.
By Franique
I like how you used adjectives in your poem.I wonder what made you think of this kind of story? Is this your favorite poem?
That poem is amazing because it has exciting describing words.I wonder if you could add some more poetry writing.Emile rm11
Nice Descriptive Words. I like how you painted a picture in our heads
By Brenner
I liked how you used lot's of interesting words in your poem.
I wonder how long it took you to do this poem?
Keep up the good work.
By Ryka room11
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