This is a poem I wrote in class. My poem is called cutting and is for those who are not wanting to live life. I want them to read this and change their mind.
Cutting
Put it down it’s not worth the risk,
Take a breather and count to ten,
Feel the crave go away,
Take control so you don’t go astray,
When the count is up you will feel a better person,
You wouldn’t want to harm yourself,
Take it away,
Put it down it’s not worth the risk.
2 comments:
Hi Lauren
I think this would be very convincing. I like your poem especially because it is persuasive and it creates a connection.
Keep up the great work Lauren.
Kia ora Lauren
I do love this poem about Cutting it is very persuasive.It could persuade people who have the problem. But the self harm could not kill the person.
Keep the creative work up Lauren.
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