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Saturday 20 February 2016

In the shadows

Purpose: to entertain and share on blog
Walt: write a powerful introduction
In the shadows.

There was once a man who hid in the shadow. His name was Jack. Jack was a middle aged man who trotted around a lot. He lived alone in his apartment uptown in New York. He was like any other middle aged man but something mysterious happened. It was the peak of midnight the owls were hooting and the moon was shining. Jack stumbled out to his balcony being woken by a suspicious glow in the town.

He scurried down stairs tangled with his keys trying to find the right one. He zoomed into town looking at all the closed stores. Jack was getting closer and closer wanting to know what was happening. He arrived at the scene. Hurrying over in his bathrobe and slippers trying to find anything. Jack saw a badly damaged car. He saw an injured lady and use all his might to pick her up.

Jack had seen what had happened. He picked her up with all his might and assisted her. She had savior cuts,wounds and bruises. The ladies had part of her hand that had been cut off. Jack had no time to react he didn’t know what to do. He stood and thought for a while. He pulled out his cellphone and dialed 911.

The ambulance arrived on the scene shortly after he rang. The ambulance took her away. She was clinging on to dear life. The ambulance officer said “If you hadn’t have rang when you did she could of died.” Jack couldn’t believe it. He gasp some air looked up and saw blazing fire and badly damaged car.


The next morning  Jack got a call saying “Good morning Jack we would like you to come to the hospital.” Jack in no wait hopped into his car and was on his way. When he arrived he was greeted by many people one of them was the lady. The lady was all stitched up but thankful to be alive. She thanked Jack for his bravery, even the news crew was there. Jack was finally no longer in the shadows and the hero he is.






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