That girl.

That girl.

Once there was a girl named Jess. Jess was an average, normal teenager as you may think. She's not one of those girly girls that you people think she's a racer a she loves hitting the track. Jess got a big personality and racing was her passion. Her born day was slowly peeking around the corner. She was praying to god that she get a Pink 458 as her gift. The day came about and she was showered in gifts, but the main gift she was waiting for was a brand new Ferrari. "Jess come outside I got something for you" her  mother exclaims. " A new car " Jumping with joy Jess says she going to take it to the track.

Few minutes later .....

Brum..Brum errr take off Jess "Bam, Smack" It was a head on collision with a concrete wall Jess was driving to fast and lost control. Jess was safe and sound not a scratch to be found she said that it was the perfect padding that saved her from being injured. The car was ruined and destroyed nothing could be replaced. The mechanic said that there was this contest you write a story and you get to keep a ferrari. The dad thought hard and long he decide to write it about his daughter.

The next few days the contest people rang up and said that he had won a brand new Ferrari he was jumping for joy. Jess walked in worried why her father was jumping he told Jess the news she was delighted to know what happened but didn’t know that it was her car. Her father asked her if she wanted to come and get it.

The next morning they shot off to go get it in the family wagon. Jess was so  excited. They arrived at the contest place they picked up the car. At the contest place her dad told her that it was her car, she burst into tears of joy and promised that she would take great care.

After a while Jess was so happy she was so grateful for her dad. If I was that girl I would love to ride in a Ferrari and hope one day I get the opportunity.

Prefixes and Suffixes

Walt: understand prefixes and suffixes.

Today I played this game. It’s called prefixes and suffixes. I thought that it was really easy because my teacher taught us how to understand it. Prefixes are in front of the word and suffixes are at the back. Next time I want the games to more challenging.

In the shadows

Purpose: to entertain and share on blog

Walt: write a powerful introduction

In the shadows.

There was once a man who hid in the shadow. His name was Jack. Jack was a middle aged man who trotted around a lot. He lived alone in his apartment uptown in New York. He was like any other middle aged man but something mysterious happened. It was the peak of midnight the owls were hooting and the moon was shining. Jack stumbled out to his balcony being woken by a suspicious glow in the town.

He scurried down stairs tangled with his keys trying to find the right one. He zoomed into town looking at all the closed stores. Jack was getting closer and closer wanting to know what was happening. He arrived at the scene. Hurrying over in his bathrobe and slippers trying to find anything. Jack saw a badly damaged car. He saw an injured lady and use all his might to pick her up.

Jack had seen what had happened. He picked her up with all his might and assisted her. She had savior cuts,wounds and bruises. The ladies had part of her hand that had been cut off. Jack had no time to react he didn’t know what to do. He stood and thought for a while. He pulled out his cellphone and dialed 911.

The ambulance arrived on the scene shortly after he rang. The ambulance took her away. She was clinging on to dear life. The ambulance officer said “If you hadn’t have rang when you did she could of died.” Jack couldn’t believe it. He gasp some air looked up and saw blazing fire and badly damaged car.

The next morning  Jack got a call saying “Good morning Jack we would like you to come to the hospital.” Jack in no wait hopped into his car and was on his way. When he arrived he was greeted by many people one of them was the lady. The lady was all stitched up but thankful to be alive. She thanked Jack for his bravery, even the news crew was there. Jack was finally no longer in the shadows and the hero he is.

Working in a group

      

 Walt: solve problems involving patterns.

On Wednesday our teacher gave us an algebra book during the maths time. I worked in a group with my friends. I thought it was good to work in a group because I would help my friends and they would help me. We could all discuss our answers.  I feel that we should always work in a group. It is faster to get the answers. I hope we can work in groups again.